Thursday, 26 February 2015

How Maui slowed the sun

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3 comments:

  1. Kapai Quentin, I like the way you have used the gold and pink highlighters to help you with your learning.

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  2. Wow great writing

    From Grace and Quiana

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  3. Good wrighting ing. Marion kittycat9

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