Tuesday, 17 February 2015

Sbw is Sonny Bill-Williams

                                                          
        
      He runs like a cheetah. Sonny is a boxing mania man. He's awesome and great at rugby. His 
      hair is browner than a kiwi. His skin colour is light brown. He plays for the All blacks and Chiefs. He's a New Zealander. He's my favourite rugby player. He's a try scoring machine. He's a SBW man. He scores ataahua try's. He smacks the ball on the try line all the time. He use to be in the rosters and bull dogs. 
      

1 comment:

  1. Thank you Quentin, for using the success criteria. I really like the similes you have used. Maybe next time you could work on the structure of the story, having an intorduction, middle and the end. Kapai!!

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