Wednesday, 29 June 2016

Paitamariki







Sports start assessment

WALT: be active

Description: this is my assessment for sports start.

Evaluation: I think I did very well and get a green target.

Feedback:  You did well with this post.
Jamie
Feedforward: You could have a longer description.






Tuesday, 28 June 2016

Maori pukapuka

Description: this is my pukapuka Maori. Check it out
I think I get a green target
WALT write a Maori pukapuka
Feedback: I like your characters and how complicated the sentence is. (Nikau)






Monday, 27 June 2016

Storytelling

Description: this is my learning about story telling hope you enjoy

Evaluation: I think I get a green target!

Feedback: I think you did good on your post.
Memphis
Feedforward: I think yo need to make your photos more clear

WALT: be storytellers
Co constructed success criteria: we want to be the best story tellers we can be: we will know we have achieved this when we...
  • Add detail, through actions or the way you stand
  • make sure your story makes sense
  • descriptive language
  • tell the story in the right order
  • Beginning, middle and the end
  • expression
  • have a clear voice
  • Be creative
  • involve your audience
  • practice
  • Good pace, take your time but not too much time
  • Use a few props
  • Scene
My story is called Maui and mount Tauranga. It is where Maui and his four brothers looking at the beautiful mount Tauranga and then Maui has a idea!  He and his brothers can put mount Tauranga into the sky so everyone can see it. So he tells his brothers and they agree! So they lift and lift and then goes flying in to the sky! The end!






Anei nga pikitia/ here are my pictures.

Wednesday, 8 June 2016

Science investigation ( about Saturn )


Description: This is my science investigation about Saturn. Enjoy!
I think I get a green target because I have heaps of resources
Feedback:I think you have done lots and have a good layout!

The assessment has changed to nine green targets 


This plan has changed quiet abit